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Party in Ipanema, baby!

I want to party
I want to samba
I want to party
I want to samba

I want to party
And live my life
I want to party
And fly

Imma fly, fly just like a bird
Oh yeah, you're right,
So let me fly just like a rocket, then
Fly so high where I need to come down for oxygen
Cause once we start it, baby, ain't no ain't no stoppin' then

Cause I just want to live my life, and party
All I want is to be free, and rock my body
Ain't nowhere around the world that I want to live my life
In Rio
Cause in Rio
In Rio, I realize
I want to party
I want to samba
I want to party
And fly

I'm that samba, samba
Master, master, master
Master, master

Who shouts out?
Imma get your blaster, blaster,
Blaster, blaster, blaster
You dance fast,
But I dance faster, faster, faster
Faster, faster

You're too slow
You need to catch up

You can dance, and dance, but I...

I want to party
I want to samba
I want to party
I want to samba

I want to party
And live my life
I want to party
And fly

Hey, hey, hey, hey, hey, hey


Laya Laya Laya Laya

Hey

Laya Laya Laya Laya Laya Laya Laya Laya

Hey, hey, hey, hey, hey, hey

Hey, hey, hey, hey

Velda :dummy:
I love Rio's soundtrack <33333333

Velda and art by me.
Song here [link] .
Listen to it, it's great!
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:star::star::star::star::star-half: Overall
:star::star::star::star::star: Vision
:star::star::star::star::star: Originality
:star::star::star::star::star: Technique
:star::star::star::star::star-empty: Impact

OK! This is only my 3rd critique, so I apologize if it sucks a bit <img src="e.deviantart.net/emoticons/x/x…" width="15" height="15" alt=":XD:" title="XD"/> So let's get started!

<img src="e.deviantart.net/emoticons/b/b…" width="10" height="10" alt=":bulletgreen:" title="Bullet; Green"/>WHAT I LIKE<img src="e.deviantart.net/emoticons/b/b…" width="10" height="10" alt=":bulletgreen:" title="Bullet; Green"/>
So, this is what I like here. Number one, this whole thing is pretty awesome! The pose is great and definitely well thought out. The colors that you chose for her are wonderful and make her pop and be noticeable. This style is definitely the greatest. But never mind that! Her expression shows that she's having fun but also challenging someone at the same time. She also looks like she's about to perform a complex aerial move. Now, let's move on...

<img src="e.deviantart.net/emoticons/b/b…" width="10" height="10" alt=":bulletred:" title="Bullet; Red"/>WHAT NEEDS IMPROVEMENT<img src="e.deviantart.net/emoticons/b/b…" width="10" height="10" alt=":bulletred:" title="Bullet; Red"/>
Well, this is most definitely the part nobody likes. Improvements and mistakes. Let's start with the improvements. The rings around her neck, front legs/arms and hind leg could be a little bit more spaced out to show more detail and the small pink area on her tail could be expanded just a bit just to increase the amount of pink color. Also, the purple part of her underbelly... Is it supposed to abruptly end or begin behind the yellow/gold neck ring? If not, it doesn't hurt to draw an extra line to mark the real start of the purple. Also, the purple that ends hiding behind Velda's arm could be slightly extended so that it ends just a bit after the arm. Also, if her eyes are "odd" {one is golden-yellow and the other is purple-pink}, then don't worry about this: it could be a mistake. Just mentioning. Expand her wings also, unless you want them like that <img src="e.deviantart.net/emoticons/l/l…" width="15" height="15" alt=":lol:" title="LOL"/> The clouds could also be a bit more detailed and add some shading! That would be great! The last thing: The part where the claw begins on her {our perspective} right arm could just be part of the toe/finger and leave that claw where it is <img src="e.deviantart.net/emoticons/s/s…" width="15" height="15" alt=":)" title=":) (Smile)"/>

<img src="e.deviantart.net/emoticons/b/b…" width="10" height="10" alt=":bulletpink:" title="Bullet; Pink"/>ALL-IN-ALL<img src="e.deviantart.net/emoticons/b/b…" width="10" height="10" alt=":bulletpink:" title="Bullet; Pink"/>
This is wonderful and certainly one of your best works. Keep it up, Wilma! <img src="e.deviantart.net/emoticons/b/b…" width="15" height="15" alt=":D" title=":D (Big Grin)"/>